Your next door neighbour own a small dog that bark throughout day and night. Write a letter to your neighbour requesting that something be done about the dog. Your reason for writing. What you would like to happen. A nice respectful style.

#door #neighbour #dog #bark #night #reason #style

Dear Mike I hope

this

letter finds you well. I am Jain who lives on the second floor. I have recently understood that you have bought a pet and as it barks all the time, I realized

that is

dog

. I wish you had great moments with each other. I am writing

this

letter to tell you about your

dog

's barks. As you know I work during the night and I need a quiet area for resting during the day.

Furthermore

this

sound is really annoying and lasts too long even at night. I am not able to rest and unwind either day or night.

This

situation is like a nightmare for me actually. Honestly,I have not ever had a pet and I do not have any information about dogs. But, I consult with one of my friends. He is a vet. He suggested an appointment to examine your

dog

to find a reason and solution for its barks. If you are sure there are no problems with your

dog

's food or health issues, tell me to set an appointment with my friend. He is very professional. I hope you understand my situation and do not get upset about my letter. I have a demanding job and I need rest and relaxation. I am looking forward to your response about setting an appointment with my vet friend. His office is very close to our flat. Sincerely M

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task response

Your letter is very well-structured and addresses the key points clearly. However, adding a little more detail about how the dog's barking affects your daily life could make your case even stronger.

coherence cohesion

In order to improve coherence as well, be sure to maintain consistent punctuation and spacing, as there was a minor issue with the placement of a comma in 'Honestly,...'.

task response

You have successfully covered all the given instructions, including the reason for writing, what you would like to happen, and maintaining a respectful tone throughout.

coherence cohesion

Your letter follows a logical structure with a clear introduction, explanation of the problem, proposed solution, and conclusion, making it very easy to follow.

coherence cohesion

The language you used is polite and respectful, which is appropriate for this context.

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

238 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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