Your next door neighbour own a small dog that bark throughout day and night. Write a letter to your neighbour requesting that something be done about the dog. Your reason for writing. What you would like to happen. A nice respectful style.

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Dear Mike I hope

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letter finds you well. I am Jain who lives on the second floor. I have recently understood that you have bought a pet and as it barks all the time, I realized

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dog

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. I wish you had great moments with each other. I am writing

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letter to tell you about your

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's barks. As you know I work during the night and I need a quiet area for resting during the day.

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sound is really annoying and lasts too long even at night. I am not able to rest and unwind either day or night.

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situation is like a nightmare for me actually. Honestly,I have not ever had a pet and I do not have any information about dogs. But, I consult with one of my friends. He is a vet. He suggested an appointment to examine your

dog

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to find a reason and solution for its barks. If you are sure there are no problems with your

dog

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's food or health issues, tell me to set an appointment with my friend. He is very professional. I hope you understand my situation and do not get upset about my letter. I have a demanding job and I need rest and relaxation. I am looking forward to your response about setting an appointment with my vet friend. His office is very close to our flat. Sincerely M

Maral.qanbarii1992Wed Aug 07 2024

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task response

Your letter is very well-structured and addresses the key points clearly. However, adding a little more detail about how the dog's barking affects your daily life could make your case even stronger.

coherence cohesion

In order to improve coherence as well, be sure to maintain consistent punctuation and spacing, as there was a minor issue with the placement of a comma in 'Honestly,...'.

task response

You have successfully covered all the given instructions, including the reason for writing, what you would like to happen, and maintaining a respectful tone throughout.

coherence cohesion

Your letter follows a logical structure with a clear introduction, explanation of the problem, proposed solution, and conclusion, making it very easy to follow.

coherence cohesion

The language you used is polite and respectful, which is appropriate for this context.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

238 words

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Your next door neighbour own a small dog that bark throughout day and night. Write a letter to your neighbour requesting that something be done about the dog. Your reason for writing. What you would like to happen. A nice respectful style.

The working week should be shorter and workers should have a longer weekend. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people regard video games as harmless fun, or even as a useful educational tooL Others, however, believe that videos games are having an adverse effect on the people who play them. In your opinion, do the drawbacks of video games outweigh tne benefits?

In some countries, government are encouraging industries and business to move to regional areas outside the big cities. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages.

. Some people believe that children should be involved in making their school\'s rules. Others say that only adults should make the school\'s rules. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Some people believe that countries should produce the food to feed their population themselves and import as little as possible. To what extent do you agree or disagree?