There is a strong argument that young people from poor families should study and
part-
to cater to their financial needs. In
essay, I will examine from both sides the benefits and drawbacks of the statement.
with, teens who are
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part-
jobs aside
studying have more advantages and the prominent one is they can help their family's economy with their own salary.
, My best friend in high
was not born fancy, and her family economy was not stable. She decided to take a side job in between classes as an admin with a salary of 5 thousand a month. Her income allows her to cater to her needs without the need to ask for money from her parents anymore
as buying new shoes and servicing her laptop. It makes her financially independent for her age.
, she even can lighten her parents' financial burden by paying for her sister's
fees. She contributes a lot to her family's income.
, on the other side,
the pros, there are some negative sides to
situation. The adverse consequence is being a part-timer makes
have a
constraint and need to bear more responsibility. Their
will be more hectic than other
because after classes they need to go to the office, sit behind the desk, and finish their
. They are not only responsible as a student but
as a worker, so they need to manage their
between studying, doing their
, and resting at the same
. Some
even sacrifice their rest
to finish their homework and their
both deadlines.
, most of them get burnout and stress.
, my best friend in her first 3 months as an admin part-
, struggled to organize her schedule well. She often did not sleep for 2 days in a row because need to finish her
assignments and
tasks at the same
.
, she ended up getting typhus and needed to be hospitalized because of physical and mental fatigue.
, taking two roles, as a part-timer and a student, makes the
focus divided between academics and
. In most cases, the academic performances of the
are most likely to decrease because they hardly focus more on study.
In conclusion, there are some advantages and disadvantages for teens who come from impoverished families to
as part-timers aside from studying at
. The benefits are they can contribute to increasing their family income and make them financially independent at a young age,
, there are some things they need to pay for
as sacrificing their resting
and having chances of declining their academic performances
. Everything does not come easy, it requires something to sacrifice for.