You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job. Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment. In your letter: • describe the problem with the equipment • explain how this problem is affecting your work • say what you want the shop or to do

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

this

letter to complain about

oven

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an oven

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that I purchased from your store a month ago. Unfortunately, it

has

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suddenly stopped working and I could not cook a cake. It suddenly emitted a foul smell and

also

a small spark

cam

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came

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out of it. I was very worried about it.

This

has a huge impact on my work because I cook a cake from home for various events and it is my only income. If I do not have an

oven

, I will

lost

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a lot of customers . And that means, I am in trouble. That's why, I asked you to install a new

oven

or repair the

oven

today. If I do not get

answer

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from you, I will write my application in the appropriate places. I hope you understand me and I look forward to your reply. Thank you in advance for your help.

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Your

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faithfully, Shabnam

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task achievement

The introduction is clear, but make sure to mention in the first sentence exactly which piece of equipment you're referring to (e.g., 'the oven').

coherence cohesion

Consider breaking down the second paragraph into two parts: one describing the problem in detail and the other explaining its impact on your work. This will make it easier to follow.

task achievement

You have clearly outlined the problem with the equipment and its impact on your work. This satisfies the task requirements.

coherence cohesion

Your structure includes an introduction, a description of the problem, its impact, and a request—making it logical and easy to follow.

greeting and closing

Ending with a polite request for action and a thank you note gives a good impression and shows proper letter-writing etiquette.

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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

156 words

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