The two maps show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010
The two maps illustrate the development in the construction of the city hospital building from 2007 to 2010.
Overall
, significant changes have been made outdoors, Linking Words
while
the indoor structure remained the same over the given years.
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Regarding
2007, the hospital building contained an outdoor car park for patients and staff, which was located Change preposition
In
at
the south area of the building. In the same area, there were six bus stops across the hospital Change preposition
in
road
. The north of the building was surrounded by a ring Use synonyms
road
, with no exits provided in that area.
In 2010, noticeable updates were made to the outdoor infrastructure. Use synonyms
Firstly
, a new car park for the public has been created in the east of the building. Linking Words
Secondly
, to the west of the hospital Linking Words
road
, a new bus station was constructed. Use synonyms
Additionally
, two new roundabouts were created south of the building. The first roundabout was located at the intersection of City Linking Words
Road
and Hospital Use synonyms
Road
, Use synonyms
while
the second was established at the main gate of the building.Linking Words
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