The two maps show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010

The two maps show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010
The two maps illustrate the development in the construction of the city hospital building from 2007 to 2010.
Overall
, significant changes have been made outdoors,
while
the indoor structure remained the same over the given years.
Regarding
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2007, the hospital building contained an outdoor car park for patients and staff, which was located
at
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the south area of the building. In the same area, there were six bus stops across the hospital
road
. The north of the building was surrounded by a ring
road
, with no exits provided in that area. In 2010, noticeable updates were made to the outdoor infrastructure.
Firstly
, a new car park for the public has been created in the east of the building.
Secondly
, to the west of the hospital
road
, a new bus station was constructed.
Additionally
, two new roundabouts were created south of the building. The first roundabout was located at the intersection of City
Road
and Hospital
Road
,
while
the second was established at the main gate of the building.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words road with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • dual carriageway
  • roundabout
  • traffic flow
  • multi-story car park
  • green spaces
  • pedestrian provisions
  • footpaths
  • traffic signals
  • construction phase
  • ambulances
  • carriageway expansion
  • traffic congestion
  • pedestrian crossings
  • urban planning
  • infrastructure development
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