Your next door neighbour own a small dog that bark throughout day and night. Write a letter to your neighbour requesting that something be done about the dog. Your reason for writing. What you would like to happen. A nice respectful style.
Dear Mr William,
I am your
next door
family in the neighbourhood and today I'm writing to ask you for a Add a hyphen
next-door
favor
.
As a pet lover, I empathize that you love your puppy as Change the spelling
favour
so am
I with my 2 cats. It is understandable that we sometimes cannot control the barking Verb problem
do
continuosly
from our dog, but in my case, I'd Correct your spelling
continuously
been
suffered from Unnecessary verb
apply
this
noise for day and night within that last
week. I am quite sure I am not the only one having this
issue, as Mrs Frances told me yesterday that she could sleep well for many nights.
For now, I'd suggest that you can house your dog inside at night to reduce the noise on our street and we all can have a good night
sleep. Change noun form
night's
This
will also
help your puppy, as he will feel more comfort
and safer Replace the word
comfortable
that
could make him less Correct pronoun usage
which
agressive
. Another way I think you can do is take him on a walk daily, as Correct your spelling
aggressive
this
will help him release any extra energy and calm himself during his time at home.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Thank you
BenSubmitted by xbinh91 on
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coherence cohesion
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coherence cohesion
You might want to add a clearer closing statement or call to action to wrap up the letter.
suitable writing tone
The letter maintains a respectful tone throughout, which is very important in such situations.
complete response
The letter clearly addresses the issue and provides reasonable suggestions for solutions.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,