Your next door neighbour own a small dog that bark throughout day and night. Write a letter to your neighbour requesting that something be done about the dog. Your reason for writing. What you would like to happen. A nice respectful style.

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Dear Mr William, I am your

next door

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family in the neighbourhood and today I'm writing to ask you for a

favor

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. As a pet lover, I empathize that you love your puppy as

so am

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I with my 2 cats. It is understandable that we sometimes cannot control the barking

continuosly

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continuously

from our dog, but in my case, I'd

been

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suffered from

this

noise for day and night within that

last

week. I am quite sure I am not the only one having

this

issue, as Mrs Frances told me yesterday that she could sleep well for many nights. For now, I'd suggest that you can house your dog inside at night to reduce the noise on our street and we all can have a good

night

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sleep.

This

will

also

help your puppy, as he will feel more

comfort

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and safer

that

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could make him less

agressive

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aggressive

. Another way I think you can do is take him on a walk daily, as

this

will help him release any extra energy and calm himself during his time at home. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Thank you Ben

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coherence cohesion

Consider breaking down long sentences to improve clarity and readability.

coherence cohesion

You might want to add a clearer closing statement or call to action to wrap up the letter.

suitable writing tone

The letter maintains a respectful tone throughout, which is very important in such situations.

complete response

The letter clearly addresses the issue and provides reasonable suggestions for solutions.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

192 words

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