Your next door neighbour own a small dog that bark throughout day and night. Write a letter to your neighbour requesting that something be done about the dog. Your reason for writing. What you would like to happen. A nice respectful style.

Dear Mr William, I am your
next door
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family in the neighbourhood and today I'm writing to ask you for a
favor
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. As a pet lover, I empathize that you love your puppy as
so am
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I with my 2 cats. It is understandable that we sometimes cannot control the barking
continuosly
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continuously
from our dog, but in my case, I'd
been
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suffered from
this
noise for day and night within that
last
week. I am quite sure I am not the only one having
this
issue, as Mrs Frances told me yesterday that she could sleep well for many nights. For now, I'd suggest that you can house your dog inside at night to reduce the noise on our street and we all can have a good
night
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sleep.
This
will
also
help your puppy, as he will feel more
comfort
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and safer
that
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which
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could make him less
agressive
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aggressive
. Another way I think you can do is take him on a walk daily, as
this
will help him release any extra energy and calm himself during his time at home. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Thank you Ben
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coherence cohesion
Consider breaking down long sentences to improve clarity and readability.
coherence cohesion
You might want to add a clearer closing statement or call to action to wrap up the letter.
suitable writing tone
The letter maintains a respectful tone throughout, which is very important in such situations.
complete response
The letter clearly addresses the issue and provides reasonable suggestions for solutions.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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