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The table below show th number of cars produced im three countries from 2003 to 2009. Sumarize the infomation by selecting and reporting the main feature, and make compairisons where relevant.

The table below show th number of cars produced im three countries from 2003 to 2009. Sumarize the infomation by selecting and reporting the main feature, and make compairisons where relevant.
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The table provides information about the statistics of
cars
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 manufactured in three states
such
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 as Argentina , Australia and
Thailand
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 between 2003 and 2009.
Overall
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, it can be seen that the maximum number of
cars
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 were produced in
Thailand
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 in 2006 ,
while
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 the lowest digits of vehicles were manufactured in Argentina in 2003.
To begin
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 with , in 2003 , the
cars
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 manufactured in Argentina were 235,008 which rose to 352,759 in 2006 . In 2009 , the figures increased dramatically accounting for 466,089.
Furthermore
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,Australia produced 452,163
cars
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 in 2003. The digits abated in the next years . In 2006 and 2009 Australia manufactured approximately 341,268 and 245,264
cars
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 respectively.
On the other hand
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 ,
Thailand
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 produced the highest number of
cars
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 . In 2003,
Thailand
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 manufactured 735,825
cars
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 , yet in the next six years, figures showed fluctuations.
Moreover
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,
Thailand
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 produced probably 116,235,6
cars
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 in 2006 ,
whereas
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 in 2009 , the digits reduced to 999,963.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words cars, thailand with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • car production
  • trends
  • growth
  • decline
  • peak production
  • increase
  • decrease
  • fluctuation
  • volume
  • relative position
  • trend analysis
  • manufacturing output
  • industrial performance
  • year-over-year change
  • comparison
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