The  process below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane.

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sugar

is produced from

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sugar

cane.   At a glance, it is apparent that, the process by which the

sugar

is produced

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different ways. There are eight steps which

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with growing and 

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with drying and cooling.   

Firstly

, looking at progress in detail, the process begins at the

sugar

canes are grown for 12 or 18 months.

Then

, it is harvested by special  machines or people. Before juice is purified in a limestone filter, the

sugar

canes are crushed by special

marchinery

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machinery

. After the juice

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, it will be turned into syrup by

evaporator

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an evaporator

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.   

The next step is

that, after the juice has been converted into syrup, the

sugar

crystals are

separeted

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separated

by a centrifuge.

Finally

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product is sent to the

last

stage, where the

sugar

is

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dried

dry

dryed

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dried

and cooled