Many
people
nowadays have high levels of weight . Fast
food
is the main reason of overweight and the government should put taxes
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it and
prices
must be
more high Replace the words
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. In
this
I will write about two points of view .
Firstly
,
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humanAdd the comma(s)
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who eats always from
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the future
he Correct pronoun usage
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will be sick .
Secondly
, fast
food
destroyChange the verb form
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the Correct article usage
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human health so
managers must make the price of
this
food
the highest
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all types of
food
.
Moreover
, when the
prices
go on not all
people
will
can Remove a modal verb
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buy it because not all
people
are riches .
Also
,
humanFix the agreement mistake
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will buy healthy
food
from markets like vegetables , fruits and meets when they see the high
prices
of fast
food
.
In addition
,
humanFix the agreement mistake
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who
are Unnecessary verb
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really love fast
food
he Correct pronoun usage
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will buy it
althoughChange preposition
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theCorrect article usage
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huge price .
Besides
, high
prices
isChange the verb form
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not always
reasonAdd an article
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to stop
eatChange the form of the verb
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it because
manCorrect article usage
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who
loveCorrect subject-verb agreement
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it absolutely
he Correct pronoun usage
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will work hard to get money and buy it .
Additionally
, not all
people
did not Verb problem
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buy unhealthy
food
because they
didWrong verb form
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not
hadChange the verb form
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money to buy it maybe they can not eat it or they
didWrong verb form
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not like it so there are more reasons to not eat fast
food
.
To conclude
, raising the
prices
of fast
food
notAdd a missing verb
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a
forChange preposition
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obesity .
Finally
, there are many types of
people
and
and not all of them can buy expensive
food
raising the
prices
of fast
food
some times
be Unnecessary verb
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solve
this
problem
andCorrect word choice
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some timesCorrect your spelling
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no Correct your spelling
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.