The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007,2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selectig and reporting the maain features and make the compariosn where relevant.
The bar chart depicts information about how many
families
earne
five different incomes in several years including 2007, 2011 and 2015 in the United States.
Correct your spelling
earned
Overall
, what stands out from the chart is that the highest number
of families
earned $100,000 or more,while
the lowest number
of households
earned less than $25,000.
Regarding
2007, the Change preposition
In
number
of families
who earned less than $25,000 was slightly lower than who
earned $25,000-$49,000, with 25 Correct pronoun usage
those who
million
and above 25 million
respectively. However
, the number
of households
earns
$75,000-$99,999 was nowhere near as the Wrong verb form
earning
number
of households
earns
$100,000 or more, with around 15 Wrong verb form
earning
million
and below 30 million
in turn. More than 20 million
families
earned $50,000-$74,000.
In terms of 2011 and 2015, the number
of individuals who earns
$50,000-$74,000 was the same in both years 2011 and 2015, with around 20 Wrong verb form
earned
million
households
. In contrast
, the figure of
individuals earned less than $20,000 and $25,000-$49,999 was similar by small points in both years, by more than 25 Change preposition
for
million
and less than 30 million
. While
in 2011, the third-highest number
of households
was earning $100,000 or more, this
figure represented the bigest
Change the word
biggest
number
in 2015, with almost 30 million
and just over 30 million
respectively.Submitted by alharrasialanood7 on
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