The bar chart shows the divorce rates in two European countries from 2011 to 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The bar chart illustrates the proportion of people who divorce in
Finland
and Sweden
between 2011 and 2015.
Overall
, it is clear that
although
Sweden
's rate was higher than Finland
until 2011, Change noun form
Finland's
Finland
surpassed Sweden
in 2015.
Focusing on Sweden
, about 43% of people divorced in 2011. After
this
year, the rate became the top of the graph at below 50% in 2012. There was the largest gap between Sweden
and Finland
, which was approximately 17% in this
period. After decreasing through two years, the number of divorces reached 48% in 2015.
Turning to Finland
, before hitting the bottom in 2012 at 32%, about 38% of people chose a divorce in 2011. Finland
saw an upward trend, rising significantly to 41% in 2014. This
trend continued until 2015, at the remaining rate. Finally
, Finland
passed over Sweden
, which made the gap between the two countries narrow considerably in the last
period.Submitted by nao.bb0820 on
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words finland, sweden with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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