The graphs below show the total percentage of films released and the total percentage of ticket sales in 1996 and 2006 in a country. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graphs below show the total percentage of films released and the total percentage of ticket sales in 1996 and 2006 in a country. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph illustrates a country's
overall
percentage
of
films
released and
overall
percentage
of
cinema
ticket
sales
in 1996 and 2006. The
percentage
is based on four film categories ;
drama
,
comedy
,
fantasy
and
romance
.
Overall
,
drama
had the highest
percentage
of
films
released in 1996,
however
,
comedy
had the highest
percentage
of
cinema
ticket
sales
both in 1996 and 2006. In 1996, there were over 25% of
drama
films
released
while
fantasy
films
released were almost 50% less than that of
drama
films
.
Moreover
,
romance
films
had the lowest
percentage
of
films
released with around 8% which has remained constant by 2006.
On the other hand
,
comedy
had the biggest
percentage
of
cinema
ticket
sales
in 1996 with 20%
while
drama
only had over 15% of
ticket
sales
.
Romance
films
only had 5%
cinema
ticket
sales
which is around 40% more than that of
fantasy
films
with only around 3% theatre
ticket
sales
making
fantasy
films
having the lowest
percentage
of
cinema
ticket
sales
in 1996. In 2006, there was an increase in the
percentage
of
films
released but
drama
films
still had the highest
percentage
at 35% , followed by
comedy
films
and
fantasy
films
with 25% and around 17% respectively.
Then
again,
comedy
films
had the highest
percentage
of
cinema
ticket
sales
with around 23% followed by
drama
films
with around 17%.
Moreover
,
romance
films
had the lowest
percentage
of theatre
sales
with around 2%.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "moreover, overall, while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, films, cinema, ticket, sales, drama, comedy, fantasy, romance with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 12 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 7 times.

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  • depict
  • significant increases/decreases
  • highlighting
  • drawing comparisons
  • discrepancies
  • notable trends
  • unexpected findings
  • anomalies
  • phenomenon
  • emphasizing
  • evolution
  • implications
  • producers
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