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The graph below shows the differences in wheat exports over three different areas. Write a areport for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

The graph below shows the differences in wheat exports over three different areas. Write a areport for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
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The graph illustrates the changes in
wheat
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exports
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 in three different areas between 1985 and 1990. The areas shown are Australia, Canada, and the European Community. The data is measured in millions of
tonnes
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. In 1985, Canada exported the most
wheat
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, with about 19
million
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tonnes
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. The European Community exported slightly less, around 17
million
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tonnes
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,
while
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 Australia exported the least, with approximately 15
million
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tonnes
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. Over the next few years,
wheat
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exports
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 from Canada fluctuated. They reached a peak in 1988, with about 25
million
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tonnes
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, before dropping sharply to around 14
million
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tonnes
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 in 1989. In 1990, Canada’s
exports
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 slightly increased to around 18
million
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tonnes
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. Australia's
wheat
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exports
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 showed a different pattern. They remained relatively stable until 1986, when they began to increase, reaching about 17
million
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tonnes
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 in 1990. The European Community experienced a steady decline in
wheat
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exports
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 from 1985 to 1987, falling to about 14
million
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tonnes
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.
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,
exports
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 increased again, peaking at approximately 21
million
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tonnes
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 in 1990.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words wheat, exports, tonnes, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • wheat exports
  • trend
  • significant increases
  • significant decreases
  • fluctuations
  • periods of stability
  • analyze
  • compare and contrast
  • similarities
  • differences
  • key points
  • potential reasons
  • climatic conditions
  • agricultural policies
  • market demand
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