You have just spent a weekend at a friend's house. When you returned home, you discovered that you had left a coat there. There are some important belongings in the pockets. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter explain that you have left the coat there say what the coat looks like, where you think you left it and what was in the pockets make some suggestions about how to get all of your belongings back

Dear Pat, I am writing
this
letter to let you know that I forgot to take my winter coat before leaving your house
this
morning. Once I realized that I left my coat, I phoned you immediately, but you guys were sleeping and did not answer my call. Please keep my dress safe as I have kept some important office documents in it. It is a full-length brown colour jacket and I remember that I hung it on the suit hanger at the main hall entrance. Please check and ensure that it has a document signed by the attorney. Tomorrow, I need to submit them to the district magistrate for work purposes. I know you guys are leaving for Disney Theme Park tomorrow. So, I have to collect it from you today. Please let me know whether it is possible for you to drop the item at my house later today, or I can come to the community centre at 7.30 pm, please bring the coat with you. I will wait for your call. Thank you.
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task achievement
You have addressed all parts of the task effectively, making it clear that you left your coat and what it contains. Continue to pay attention to including all necessary details in such letters.
coherence cohesion
Your letter is logically structured and easy to follow. To achieve a higher score, consider adding connecting phrases to make the flow even smoother.
coherence cohesion
Your greeting and closing are appropriate and natural, adding to the formal yet friendly tone of the letter.
task achievement
You have effectively described the coat and its location, ensuring clarity in your request.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • appreciation
  • accidentally
  • distinctive features
  • fabric
  • inner/outer pockets
  • courier service
  • parcels
  • reimburse
  • inconvenience
  • affectionately
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