The map below shows the plan of a proposed new town. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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the presented map illustrates the layout of a proposed new

city

Overall

, the town will have

the

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show examples

significant

numbers

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number

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of residential areas ,

parkings

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parking

and bus stations and

also

diiferent

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different

kind

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kinds

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of roads. As can be seen, two

parkings

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parking

and two bus stands will be in the middle of the map which will be

surronded

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surrounded

by some housing,

in addition

to roads and

recreationasl

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recreational

which 3 of them (

recreationals

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recreational

) are going to be located next to each

others

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other

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between south of the

city

center

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centre

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and ring

road

, another one will be

srtuctured

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structured

between right bus stand and ring

road

. all of

these region

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this region

these regions

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will be covered by

ring

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a ring

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road

that will be connected to another part of the

city

by some roads.

the

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apply

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considerable

numbers

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number

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of housing will be built around the ring

road

and

also

the

city

will have

the

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apply

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2 industrial

area

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areas

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in the northwest and southwest.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".

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Vocabulary: Replace the words city, road with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "numbers of" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "stands" was used 2 times.

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
18Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

150 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

residential housing
ring road
local roads
commercial zones
inhabitants
transportation system
bus terminals
train stations
recreational areas
sports facilities
educational institutions
schools
libraries
accessibility
industrial zones
outskirts
noise and pollution

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