The map below shows the plan of a proposed new town. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
the presented map illustrates the layout of a proposed new
city
.
Use synonyms
Overall
, the town will have Linking Words
the
significant Correct article usage
a
numbers
of residential areas , Fix the agreement mistake
number
parkings
and bus stations and Correct your spelling
parking
also
Linking Words
diiferent
Correct your spelling
different
kind
of roads.
As can be seen, two Fix the agreement mistake
kinds
parkings
and two bus stands will be in the middle of the map which will be Correct your spelling
parking
surronded
by some housing, Correct your spelling
surrounded
in addition
to roads and Linking Words
recreationasl
which 3 of them (Correct your spelling
recreational
recreationals
) are going to be located next to each Correct your spelling
recreational
others
between south of the Change to a singular noun
other
city
Use synonyms
center
and ring Change the spelling
centre
road
, another one will be Use synonyms
srtuctured
between right bus stand and ring Correct your spelling
structured
road
.
all of Use synonyms
these region
will be covered by Change the determiner
this region
these regions
ring
Add an article
a ring
road
that will be connected to another part of the Use synonyms
city
by some roads. Use synonyms
the
considerable Correct article usage
apply
numbers
of housing will be built around the ring Fix the agreement mistake
number
road
and Use synonyms
also
the Linking Words
city
will have Use synonyms
the
2 industrial Correct article usage
apply
area
in the northwest and southwest.Change to a plural noun
areas
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words city, road with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "numbers of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stands" was used 2 times.
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