The chart and table below give information about tourists at a particular holiday resort in australia. Sumerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparations where relevant

The chart and table below give information about tourists at a particular holiday resort in australia. Sumerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparations where relevant
The chart and table below illustrate data about
tourists
at a specific holiday resort in Australia. Generally , It is clearly seen that Asian
Tourists
represent the highest percentage , followed by Europeans and Americans.
However
, European
Tourists
spend more time than other nationalities.
Firstly
, Asian
tourists
cover 37% of the total percentage and spend an average of 7 seven days mostly in five-star hotels, with sightseeing being their main activity . The European visitors mass present 35% of the total number and they stay in the resort - preferably camping or caravan -for 16 days; which is the longest period among all visitors , and their main activity is swimming and sunbathing . Next , American voyagers are 18% . Even though they stay for a longer time
thus
, they prefer 4-star hotels and they love sightseeing like Asian
tourists
. Other
Tourists
from other regions stay for 10 days . They
also
stay in Camping or caravan as accommodation. And they love surfing .
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