The chart and table below give information about tourists at a particular holiday resort in australia. Sumerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparations where relevant

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The chart and table below illustrate data about

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at a specific holiday resort in Australia. Generally , It is clearly seen that Asian

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represent the highest percentage , followed by Europeans and Americans.

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, European

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spend more time than other nationalities.

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, Asian

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cover 37% of the total percentage and spend an average of 7 seven days mostly in five-star hotels, with sightseeing being their main activity . The European visitors mass present 35% of the total number and they stay in the resort - preferably camping or caravan -for 16 days; which is the longest period among all visitors , and their main activity is swimming and sunbathing . Next , American voyagers are 18% . Even though they stay for a longer time

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, they prefer 4-star hotels and they love sightseeing like Asian

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. Other

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from other regions stay for 10 days . They

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stay in Camping or caravan as accommodation. And they love surfing .

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Single idea per paragraph

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The chart and table below give information about tourists at a particular holiday resort in australia. Sumerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparations where relevant

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