Your English-speaking friend who lives in your town has asked for your advice about learning a new sport. Write an email to your friend. In your email •recommend a new sport that would be suitable for your friend to learn •explain how your friend could learn this sport •suggest that you both learn this sport together. Write at leasr 150 words. You do not need to write any addresses. Begin you letter as follows: Dear ...............,

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Dear Jack, I hope you're doing well! I was thinking about your question about learning a new sport and I'm going to share some thoughts I have. First of all, I can say that

football

is the most popular sport in our town, so it's clear that we have a lot of

football

schools here,

in addition

to the uncountable number of the smaller

football

fields, where you can play with your friends for free. Because of that, If you ask me, I would say that

football

is the best choice. As I mentioned, there are a lot of

football

academies. The most known and popular are Arsenal and Dynamo,

however

, others aren't

worse

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bad

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. I'm saying that, because I don't know the way to learn

football

better

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than being enrolled in one of them. They provide a polished training process and experienced coaches will take care of your progress, not without some pressure by the way. And you know what? I'm going to team with you if you decide to go to the academy. I like

football

and often play

together with

my friends, so it should be fun. For sure, you can join us in our friendly matches too, I will let you know when we will set up the next event. See you on the pitch! Vlad

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coherence cohesion

Continue to structure your emails with clear paragraphs, each addressing a distinct point. This makes your writing easy to follow and reader-friendly.

task achievement

To achieve an even higher score, consider varying your sentence structure a bit more to demonstrate a wide range of grammar skills.

task achievement

Each paragraph clearly addresses one part of the task: recommending a sport, explaining how to learn it, and suggesting learning together.

coherence cohesion

The email is well-organized with a clear greeting and closing, giving it a conversational and friendly tone suitable for the context.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

219 words

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