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The maps below show changes in the city of Nelson in recent times. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show changes in the city of Nelson in recent times. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given maps illustrate information about the recent changes
of
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in
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 Nelson city from 2000 until now.
Overall
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, it is obvious that people’s accessibility to cars has been eliminated and alternated with
a
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pedestrian and biking amenities.
In addition
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, the district has been depleted from trees, and
generally
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generally,
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 the number of infrastructures has risen
up
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.
According to
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 the pictures, it is readily apparent that the city
center
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centre
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,
university
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 and port are absolutely the same as before. Looking from
renovation
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a renovation
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 perspective, the old stores and road have
transformed
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been transformed
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 into
the
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a
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 modern market and walking path, respectively,
as well as
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new
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a new
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 shopping
center
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centre
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, which
is
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has been
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 replaced with
the
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apply
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greenery. In terms of construction and demolishing, a restaurant, bar and
new
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a new
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 covered market have been built
so have
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as
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 done bike rental station
along with
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 the pedestrian.
Moreover
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, the old train station has been relocated to the front of the
university
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 and
also
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 a
trainline
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train line
 was built preciously next to it. It is obvious that there was nothing next to the
university
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,
however
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, a residential building has been constructed which is directly adjacent to the
university
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.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words university with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • infrastructure
  • land use
  • residential
  • commercial
  • green spaces
  • public transport
  • urbanization
  • de-urbanization
  • facilities
  • amenities
  • industrial
  • transformation
  • recent times
  • comparisons
  • notable
  • key features
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