The maps below show changes in the city of Nelson in recent times. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given maps illustrate information about the recent changes
of
Nelson city from 2000 until now.
Change preposition
in
Overall
, it is obvious that people’s accessibility to cars has been eliminated and alternated with a
pedestrian and biking amenities. Correct article usage
apply
In addition
, the district has been depleted from trees, and generally
the number of infrastructures has risenAdd a comma
generally,
up
.
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apply
According to
the pictures, it is readily apparent that the city center
, Change the spelling
centre
university
and port are absolutely the same as before. Looking from renovation
perspective, the old stores and road have Correct article usage
a renovation
transformed
into Add a missing verb
been transformed
the
modern market and walking path, respectively, Correct article usage
a
as well as
new
shopping Correct article usage
a new
center
, which Change the spelling
centre
is
replaced with Wrong verb form
has been
the
greenery.
In terms of construction and demolishing, a restaurant, bar and Correct article usage
apply
new
covered market have been built Correct article usage
a new
so have
done bike rental station Verb problem
as
along with
the pedestrian. Moreover
, the old train station has been relocated to the front of the university
and also
a trainline
was built preciously next to it. It is obvious that there was nothing next to the Correct your spelling
train line
university
, however
, a residential building has been constructed which is directly adjacent to the university
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words university with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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