The charts below show the total number of applicants the year before and the year after Doolittle University’s social media advertising campaign, organized by age range and how close the applicants live to the university.
The previous bar chart illustrates the
amount
of people from 4 different nations
(European
Nations
, Middle East, Far East and Africa) applying to a British university from the year
1999 to the year
2003.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that the European
Nations
' applicants
started with the highest number
at the beginning of the period. However
, the amount
significantly decreased during the last
year
, showing the Far East as the country with the highest amount
of applicants
and the European
Nations
as the second lowest. Furthermore
, the Middle East showcased the lowest number
at the beginning and although
it slightly increased, it remained the lowest at the end
.
In detail, in the year
1999, the European
Nations
demonstrated the most significant number
with around 30,000. Nevertheless
, it gradually declined to just over 10,000 in the year
2003. In contrast
, Far
East recorded the second-highest Correct article usage
the Far
amount
of applicants
in the year
1999 and it considerably increased to be the highest at the end
of the period with around 30,000 applicants
.
In 1999, Africa exhibited the lowest number
with approximately 2500 people. Although
it showed some fluctuation over the years, it revealed a certain surge to just over 5,000 in 2003. Furthermore
, the Middle East started with around 15,000 but surpassed European
Nations
and Africa in the year
2003, positioning the second highest of the year
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