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The charts below show the total number of applicants the year before and the year after Doolittle University’s social media advertising campaign, organized by age range and how close the applicants live to the university.

The charts below show the total number of applicants the year before and the year after Doolittle University’s social media advertising campaign, organized by age range and how close the applicants live to the university.
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The previous bar chart illustrates the
amount
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 of people from 4 different
nations
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 (
European
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Nations
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, Middle East, Far East and Africa) applying to a British university from the
year
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 1999 to the
year
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 2003.
Overall
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, it can be clearly seen that the
European
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Nations
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'
applicants
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 started with the highest
number
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 at the beginning of the period.
However
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, the
amount
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 significantly decreased during the
last
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year
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, showing the Far East as the country with the highest
amount
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 of
applicants
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 and the
European
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Nations
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 as the second lowest.
Furthermore
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, the Middle East showcased the lowest
number
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 at the beginning and
although
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 it slightly increased, it remained the lowest
at the end
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. In detail, in the
year
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 1999, the
European
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Nations
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 demonstrated the most significant
number
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 with around 30,000.
Nevertheless
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, it gradually declined to just over 10,000 in the
year
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 2003.
In contrast
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,
Far
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the Far
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 East recorded the second-highest
amount
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 of
applicants
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 in the
year
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 1999 and it considerably increased to be the highest
at the end
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 of the period with around 30,000
applicants
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. In 1999, Africa exhibited the lowest
number
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 with approximately 2500 people.
Although
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 it showed some fluctuation over the years, it revealed a certain surge to just over 5,000 in 2003.
Furthermore
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, the Middle East started with around 15,000 but surpassed
European
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Nations
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 and Africa in the
year
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 2003, positioning the second highest of the
year
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.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "although, at the end, furthermore".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words amount, nations, european, year, applicants, number with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "just over" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
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