With an increasing communication via the internet and text messaging, face to face communication will be a thing of past. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays communications
such
as Correct article usage
the internet
internet
and text messaging Capitalize word
Internet
more
rising. In the same Correct your spelling
are
way
face-to-face communication will be in the past. In my opinion, I strongly agree with Add a comma
way,
this
statement, and the following examples will be provided in order to support my point of view.
Firstly
, using Add an article
the internet
internet
for communication is helpful. Capitalize word
Internet
Due to
save
time and costs for transportation to Change the verb form
saving
meeting
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the meeting
also
could managed time scheduel
for groups. Correct your spelling
schedule
scheduled
Furthermore
, this
is useful for people
living long distance
and Fix the agreement mistake
distances
convinence
for Correct your spelling
convenience
family
from overseas. Add an article
the family
a family
For example
, the application is called zoom
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Zoom
this
is can communicate Change preposition
with co-worker
co-worker
or study Fix the agreement mistake
co-workers
group
online. What is more Fix the agreement mistake
groups
application
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applications
Whatapps
, Line or Facebook most Correct your spelling
WhatsApp
people
contacted
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contact
them
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apply
by
via the Change preposition
apply
internet
.
Secondly
, The opportunity of
foreign Change preposition
for
laggauge
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language
translator
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translators
using
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to use
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the internet
internet
. Most Capitalize word
Internet
people
in the world spoken
English but some countries Change the form of the verb
speak
spoken
Spanish, Chinese or Thailand depending on Change the form of the verb
speak
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the country
country
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country's
laggauge
. It is Correct your spelling
language
clearly
that text messaging or Change the word
clear
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the intenet
intenet
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Internet
more
useful. Add a missing verb
is more
In addition
, people
around the world can make
a random conversation without Verb problem
have
purchase
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purchasing
flight
ticket Correct article usage
a flight
for visiting
.
In conclusion, I certainly agree Change preposition
to visit
with
increasing communication via the Change preposition
that
internet
and text messaging is helpful because save
time and costs of transport not only Correct subject-verb agreement
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