The chart below gives some of the most reported issues among people living in UK cities in 2008 (%). Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below gives some of the most reported issues among people living in UK cities in 2008 (%).

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart gives information about the distribution of three different categories namely Health services, Education and training and
Air
pollution
living issues among residents living in UK
cities
in the year 2008.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that the reported issues in seven
cities
in the UK in 2018 were dominated by health services and education and training,
while
air
pollution
became the least reported. Observing the diagram in more detail, Health service was the most reported issue in five out of seven
cities
including Newcastle, Belfast, Birmingham, Cardiff, and Manchester at around 51% to 59%.
However
, the figures for Glasgow and London were in the second position at 49% and 52%, respectively. In terms of Education and training, all the countries made up the second rank of the most reported issue in public with the exception of Glasgow and London which comprised the first rank at exactly 53%.
On the other hand
, the least reported was made by
Air
Pollution
in all
cities
. More specifically,
this
was between 5% and 15%. Interestingly, the lowest rate was allocated to Newcastle, whilst Manchester constituted the highest number of
air
pollution
.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words air, pollution, cities with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "gives" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • significant issue
  • high percentage
  • real estate market
  • traffic congestion
  • transportation issues
  • urban areas
  • health services
  • dissatisfaction
  • healthcare facilities
  • crime rates
  • safety
  • law enforcement
  • education and employment issues
  • job market
  • educational systems
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