Environmental problems such as pollution and climate change are increasing nowadays. The government has taken some measures at a global level but they only get some solutions. Why is it so? How can this problem be solved?
In recent years, worldwide global and environmental problems
such
as pollution and climate change have been escalating day by day. Unfortunately, though the government
has taken some steps to address these issues, these solutions
have not been enough to resolve them effectively. As there are a number of reasons of this
actual problem
, several solutions
are also
available to mitigate them.
The failure of government
in solving environmental problems is caused by a variety of factors. One reason why government
has been unsuccessful in its efforts is a lack of citizen awareness. Government
measures can be very effective if population is aware of its responsibilities. However
, unluckily, most of people do not even think about environment. Secondly
, several irresponsibilities (suggestion: would have better to elaborate it more – irresponsibility such
as…) are made in the execution of the government
decisions. Therefore
, the government
faces a collapse in implementation of these troubles.
Fortunately, there are a number of solutions
to resolve this
complication. Firstly
, one way to fix the problem
would be increase human awareness. The government
can take some steps to achieve this
. For instance
, some stimulating announcements and advertisements about global problems such
as pollution and climate change would be placed on social media platforms, street walls, and television. People would be promoted (misuse: encouraged) to protect the environment by some presents or money awards. Second,
to avoid irresponsibilities in the execution of decisions, government
has to invest more money to diminish this
problem
and apply punishments to the ones who break the rules. As a result
, through these ways, the problem
would be solved.
To sum up
, there are obvious reasons of why government
only get few solutions
, though they have taken some measures. However
, different solutions
are available to address this
issue. In my opinion, the presented solutions
above are suitable for this
nuisance.Submitted by nuranemelikova296 on
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