The graph below gives information on the numbers of particpants for a different activiities at one social centre in melbourne, Australia for the period 2000 to 2020.

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of people who participated in various activities at

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social centre events in Melbourne, Australia from 2000 to 2020.

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, there was an upward trend in the

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of

participants

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in

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table tennis, and a downward trend in

amature

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amateur

dramatics.

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, the

number

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of

participants

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for

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film

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club experienced fluctuation throughout the period. In 2000, the

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of

participants

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for

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film

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club started at about 63, the

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some fluctuation between 2005 and 2010,

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2015 the

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of

participants

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rose to about 65.

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, the

number

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for

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martial

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the martial

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act

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started at about 36 in 2000, there was a steady drop in 2005 to about 31

participants

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and the

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rose to 38

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in 2010, between 2015 and 2020 the

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fluctauted

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fluctuated

reaching a point of 35

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participants

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. In 2000,

table

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tennis

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number

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started

of

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at about 15

participants

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, the

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experienced a steady rise throughout the years, reaching

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highest

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of about 52

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in 2020.

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, the

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of amateur dramatics had a downward experience, starting at about 25

participants

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, the

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rose in 2005 to about 26

participants

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, in the next 15 years the

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drop

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dramatically, reaching

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lowest point at about 5

participants

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.

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, musical performances started in 2005 with no

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participants

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, in the following year, the

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rose steadily

reach

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a point of about 15

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.