A friend of yours is coming to stay in your house for a week while you are away on holiday. Write a letter to your friend to prepare them for their stay. In your letter: Give your friend information about the location of your house, tell your friend what tasks you would like them to do each day, Explain what he/she can do and see in your area

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Hello Navneet I hope you and your family are doing splendidly. I received your letter yesterday and I am glad that you are planning to visit my place, but, unfortunately, I will be on

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business trip between 21 August to 26 August.

Therefore

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, I am writing

this

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letter to give you some basic information which can be useful for you.

To begin

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with, my house location as it will be your first visit to my place. My house is situated in the centre of the city

that is

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why it is fully connected with the other parts of the city so I do not think that you will face any issues regarding transportation.

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this

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, I want you to perform some important tasks throughout my absence like please support my roommate in the kitchen as she got injured

last

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week so it is difficult for her to finish all home chores alone.

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that please take care of my dog as he is fond of evening walks, please go with him to the park every evening.

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, you can explore the beautiful locations of my hometown in your leisure like historical places and gardens

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you can enjoy your favourite meals in Indian restaurants. Hope to hear from you soon. Your lovingly, Arshdeep

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arshkaurbrarThu Aug 15 2024

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single idea per paragraph

Ensure each paragraph focuses on a single main idea to improve clarity. For instance, split the location details and the task list into separate paragraphs.

complete response

Provide a brief step-by-step direction to your house to enhance the completeness of the response.

logical structure

Avoid overly complex and long sentences to make the text more reader-friendly.

suitable writing tone

The letter maintains a polite and friendly tone throughout, which is suitable for writing to a friend.

greeting and closing

You have clearly structured the letter with an effective greeting and closing, making it easy to follow.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

218 words

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