The charts below give information about the amount of electricity used. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph and the pie chart demonstrate information about the amount of
electricity
used.
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Overall
, the daily Linking Words
demand
for Use synonyms
electricity
in winter is higher than in summer. Use synonyms
Additionally
, the proportion of Linking Words
electricity
used for heating rooms, and heating water is the highest, meanwhile, the lowest percentage is used for lighting, TV, radio and Use synonyms
also
vacuum cleaners, food mixers, and electric tools.
The results of the line chart provided present in winter the Linking Words
demand
for electrical energy rose slightly on the 3rd day of the month at about 40000, after it decreased rapidly between the 3rd and 9th of the month at about 30000; Use synonyms
however
, the Linking Words
demand
for electrical source reached a peak at around 47000 units on about 22nd. Meanwhile, the Use synonyms
demand
for Use synonyms
electricity
in summer saw a fluctuation, reaching a peak at 20000 on about the 14th of the month.
We can see that the proportion of power used for heating rooms and water is the highest at 52.5%. Use synonyms
In contrast
, the Linking Words
electricity
used for lighting, TV, and radio is the lowest one just at 15% and it has the same results as the Use synonyms
electricity
used for vacuum cleaners, food mixers, and electric tools. Use synonyms
Moreover
, only 17.5% of the whole voltage source was used for ovens, kettles and washing cars.Linking Words
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