The chart below give the number of people employed in five types of work in a certain region in Australia in 2001 and 2008.

The chart below give the number of people employed in five types of work in a certain region in Australia in 2001 and 2008.
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The presented bar chart compares data about how many people were employed in 5 various jobs in Australia's district at two different times( 2001 and 2008).
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, It was important that the trends of all occupations except forming and accounting climbed;
moreover
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, Sales popularity
in contrast
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to
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, which was the less crucial career.
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the graph, in the beginning, Sales, which were the best work with the highest number, was 155,000;
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it improved moderately and reached nearly 170,000 in 2008.
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Accounting, the second
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in 2001 at 60,000, dipped slightly and hit less than 60,000. The Next
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was Computering. It was 52,000 in 2001;
thereafter
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, it increased somewhat and touched 65,000 in 2008. The diagram demonstrates that Nursing, which had the same number as the prior
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in 2001, jumped and scored the figure, which was equal to the number in accounting in 2008. The
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was farming, which had the same as accounting fashion owing to the fact it was upper 20,000 after that declined to 19,000.
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