You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The bar chart shows the scores of teams A, B and C over four different seasons. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The bar chart shows the scores of teams A, B and C over four different seasons.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
The provided chart illustrates the amount of
points
teams A, B and C scored during four seasons.
Overall
, throughout all seasons
team
B won the highest scores and absolutely dominated the game.
However
, the amount of
points
scored decreased over the years.
Team
A's score fluctuated but experienced a slight rise from 2002 and 2005.
Team
C showed a worse performance over the time period. Every year
team
B achieved the highest score amongst other teams with a high of 82
points
in 2002. From 2002 to 2004 the results suffered a gradual downfall of 19
points
.
However
, the
team
showed a better performance in 2005 with a total of 55
points
won.
Team
A's results were pretty consistent during the four seasons except 2004 when the amount of
points
scored skyrocketed. Unfortunately, from 2004 to 2005 the results experienced a huge downfall from 35 to only 8
points
earned.
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