It is a natural process for animal species to become extinct (e.g. Dinosaurs, dodos …) There is no reason why people should try to prevent this from happening. Do you agree or disagree? [359]

Earth's history has witnessed a multitude of animal

species

existing and becoming extinct, rendering

this

process seemingly ordinary and fostering the notion that human intervention is futile.

However

, I contend that the

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to preserve biodiversity

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essential and justified. Admittedly,

extinction

is an intrinsic part of nature's evolutionary process.

Firstly

, in an ever-changing world, it is logical that

species

deficient in adaptive capabilities would inevitably confront the risk of eradication.

For example

, inhabiting predator-free islands, flightless dodo birds lacked

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against human invaders and eventually underwent

extinction

.

Furthermore

, the disappearance of certain

species

can pave the way for the rise of others. The demise of the dinosaurs,

for instance

, created ecological niches that allowed mammals to flourish, culminating in the emergence of humans.

Nevertheless

, there are compelling reasons why preventing

species

extinction

is within human responsibility.

To begin

with, the recent disappearance of numerous

species

is not purely a natural phenomenon

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but rather often driven by anthropogenic activities. Habitat destruction resulting from deforestation and urbanization,

coupled with

excessive hunting unequivocally compromises the continued existence and proliferation of diverse fauna.

Also

, the

extinction

of one animal might invoke a chain reaction that potentially

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to the collapse of the entire ecology system, ultimately jeopardizing human survival and development.

This

might be explained by the fact that ecological services derived from nature encompass the most basic human needs,

such

as food, fuel, clean water, materials and medicines. In conclusion,

although

the

extinction

of one

species

aligns with the laws of nature, human efforts to protect wildlife and ecosystems are of great significance. The current biodiversity loss not only threatens our own well-being but is largely attributed to human activities, underscoring our responsibility to mitigate

this

crisis.