The chart and tabl ebelliw give information about tourists at a particular holiday resort in Australia. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The pie chart illustrates the percentages of visitors
travelled
to the Wrong verb form
travelling
Australia
resort Correct your spelling
Australian
while
the table displays the data of travellers about activities, accommodation and length of stay based on the four different regions.
Overall
, Asia
nation
had a significantly higher proportion of Fix the agreement mistake
nations
tourists
like
to travel to Australia in Correct pronoun usage
who like
short
period Add an article
a short
while
enjoying expensive trips whereas
other region
had the lowest number of Fix the agreement mistake
regions
tourists
trying to experience unique adventures.
Looking at the total figure and main interest of vacationers, Asia
placed at the
number one with less than Correct article usage
apply
two fifths
Add a hyphen
two-fifths
while
the
America placed Correct article usage
apply
at
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apply
the
third place Correct article usage
apply
accounted
for just below a fifth. Both of them preferred sightseeing. Wrong verb form
accounting
Next,
Europe fell a close second,
accounting at
slightly more than a third and they chose to swim or Change preposition
for
sunbathing
. As for the lowest Wrong verb form
sunbathe
tourists
held by other states with one in ten and they like to surf.
Regarding night
spent, both Europe and Fix the agreement mistake
nights
tourists
from other regions picked camping or caravan to spend their night with
more than a week, 16 and 10 days, respectively. Change preposition
for
In contrast
, the
America and Correct article usage
apply
Asia
were more into luxury hotel
but American people Fix the agreement mistake
hotels
stays
two times longer than Wrong verb form
stayed
Asia
visitors.Submitted by tifjong on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words asia, tourists with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "stay" was used 2 times.
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