You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The bar chart shows the scores of teams A, B and C over four different seasons. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The bar chart shows the scores of teams A, B and C over four different seasons.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
The bar chart compares the scored
points
by 3 different groups over a 3-year period.
Overall
,
it is clear that
team
B
received the most amount of
points
, but which saw a steady decline throughout the given period.
Whereas
the other 2 groups'
points
fluctuated at the same time.
To begin
, in 2002,
team
B
scored the highest number of units, which was the peak of
this
team
, with results of 82
points
,
while
group A took just 5 units, which is twice less than the
points
of
team
C. After, in 2003, there was a dramatic decrease in scores by
team
b
consisting of only 60, meanwhile, the scored units of
team
A and
team
B
increased moderately by respectively 6 and 5
points
. In 2004, we can notice that like in 2003, the scores of group A fell to just 43
points
,
however
, there was another significant rise in the scores of
team
A from 11 to 35
points
,
whereas
group C experienced a slight decrease.
At the end
of the given period, the results of teams A and C declined again respectively to 8
points
and 5
points
, but, we can see that
team
B
experienced a slight increase to 55
points
in 2005.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas".
Vocabulary: Replace the words points, team, b with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.
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