You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The bar chart shows the scores of teams A, B and C over four different seasons. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The bar chart compares the scored
points
by 3 different groups over a 3-year period.
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Overall
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it is clear that
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team
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B
received the most amount of Use synonyms
points
, but which saw a steady decline throughout the given period. Use synonyms
Whereas
the other 2 groups' Linking Words
points
fluctuated at the same time.
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To begin
, in 2002, Linking Words
team
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B
scored the highest number of units, which was the peak of Use synonyms
this
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team
, with results of 82 Use synonyms
points
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while
group A took just 5 units, which is twice less than the Linking Words
points
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team
C. After, in 2003, there was a dramatic decrease in scores by Use synonyms
team
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b
consisting of only 60, meanwhile, the scored units of Use synonyms
team
A and Use synonyms
team
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B
increased moderately by respectively 6 and 5 Use synonyms
points
.
In 2004, we can notice that like in 2003, the scores of group A fell to just 43 Use synonyms
points
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however
, there was another significant rise in the scores of Linking Words
team
A from 11 to 35 Use synonyms
points
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whereas
group C experienced a slight decrease. Linking Words
At the end
of the given period, the results of teams A and C declined again respectively to 8 Linking Words
points
and 5 Use synonyms
points
, but, we can see that Use synonyms
team
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B
experienced a slight increase to 55 Use synonyms
points
in 2005.Use synonyms
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words points, team, b with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.
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