The bar chart shows the scores of teams A, B and C over four different seasons. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart shows the scores of teams A, B and C over four different seasons. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart compares the scored
points
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by 3 different groups over a 3-year period.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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team
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B
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received the most amount of
points
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, but which saw a steady decline throughout the given period.
Whereas
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the other 2 groups'
points
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fluctuated at the same time.
To begin
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, in 2002,
team
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B
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scored the highest number of units, which was the peak of
this
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team
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, with results of 82
points
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,
while
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group A took just 5 units, which is twice less than the
points
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of
team
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C. After, in 2003, there was a dramatic decrease in scores by
team
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b
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consisting of only 60, meanwhile, the scored units of
team
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A and
team
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B
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increased moderately by respectively 6 and 5
points
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. In 2004, we can notice that like in 2003, the scores of group A fell to just 43
points
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,
however
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, there was another significant rise in the scores of
team
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A from 11 to 35
points
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,
whereas
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group C experienced a slight decrease.
At the end
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of the given period, the results of teams A and C declined again respectively to 8
points
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and 5
points
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, but, we can see that
team
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B
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experienced a slight increase to 55
points
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in 2005.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas".
Vocabulary: Replace the words points, team, b with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.
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