The follawing bar charts shows the different modes transport used to travel to and from work in one Europian city in 1960 , 1980 and 2000

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, and foot in a European City in 1960, 1980, and 2000, with the data measured in percentages.

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seen that only people in 1980 with around 15% to 25%, had similar interest

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their transportation choices. In terms of the highest proportions, at more than 35%,

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was the first option for travel in 2000.

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as their main transport with around 33% in 1960.

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had a moderate rate at 27% in 1980 and

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accounted for 25% in 1960. Regarding the smallest amount of transport,

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in 1960 and

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in 2000 constituted exactly 5%, respectively.

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, travellers who barely

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witnessed a slight increase to 8% in 2000.

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, in 1980, the

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accounted for

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with 23%,

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with 20% and foot with 17%.