The follawing bar charts shows the different modes transport used to travel to and from work in one Europian city in 1960 , 1980 and 2000
The bar chart illustrates the rates of travellers that
using
bus, Wrong verb form
used
car
, bike
, and foot in a European City in 1960, 1980, and 2000, with the data measured in percentages. Overall
, it is clearly be
seen that only people in 1980 with around 15% to 25%, had similar interest Unnecessary verb
apply
on
their transportation choices.
In terms of the highest proportions, at more than 35%, Change preposition
in
car
was the first option for travel in 2000. Add an article
the car
This
number followed
by people who Add a missing verb
was followed
using
Wrong verb form
used
foot
as their main transport with around 33% in 1960. Add an article
the foot
Moreover
, bus
Fix the agreement mistake
buses
also
had a moderate rate at 27% in 1980 and bike
accounted for 25% in 1960.
Regarding the smallest amount of transport, Fix the agreement mistake
bikes
car
in 1960 and Fix the agreement mistake
cars
bike
in 2000 constituted exactly 5%, respectively. Fix the agreement mistake
bikes
Furthermore
, travellers who barely walking
witnessed a slight increase to 8% in 2000. Wrong verb form
walked
Finally
, in 1980, the remain
proportion Replace the word
remaining
was
accounted for Unnecessary verb
apply
car
with 23%, Fix the agreement mistake
cars
bike
with 20% and foot with 17%.Fix the agreement mistake
bikes
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words car, bike with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportions" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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