You are not happy with the course you are doing at college and would like to change to a different course. Write a letter to the college director requesting to change your course. You should include details about: what course are you doing now why you are not satisfied with that course what course you would like to change to
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Shahid from Medical Technology which commenced in early 2023, with enrollment No 11223001. I am writing
this
letter to request a change in my current course. The modules being taught do not align with my academic interests and goals.
After participating in the mentor sessions for two months, I have come to the realization that the current course is heavily theory- based
with limited practical components. Pursuing these subjects will be a bit challenging for me as different students have ways of learning and personally practical works are better than theory, Correct your spelling
theory-based
therefore
I am seeking a course that offers practical-oriented
approach to better align with my learning preference.
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a practical-oriented
However
, Have observed from my some of hostel mates that physical therapy studies are more designed-based and hands-on, incorporating both theoretical and experiential learning. This
approach not only aligns with my interests but also
provides opportunities to work in the field of physiotherapy. Therefore
I would like to request a switch from my current to
another one that I am genuinely fond of.
Thank you for your support, and I look forward to a positive response.
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Yours’
faithfully,
ShahidCorrect your spelling
Yours
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph has a central theme that is explained and developed throughout the paragraph. Mind your transitions between ideas and paragraphs to ensure smooth flow.
task achievement
Your letter does cover the points required, but the reasons for dissatisfaction could be further elaborated on, and possible outcomes of changing the course could be mentioned to strengthen the request.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite