The diagram shows a method of shaping glass containers. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The diagram shows a method of shaping glass containers. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The given diagram shows the process of how
glass
containers are manufactured. In general, the entire production process is man-made with a linear style of manufacturing and it
also
involves nine steps, starting with the melting of
glass
and culminating with package or elimination. Observing the diagram in detail, it is obvious that the process takes place once a
glass
heats in a special oven.
This
step is followed by putting hot
glass
into the mould number one. Afterwards, the press starts the creation of a shape.
Next,
this
shape is isolated by a thick wall being removed from a mould, new shape appears, which is mould number two.
Then
, within several hours, the air is processing the new mould.
This
is where the final work in over begins. After the
glass
is heated in the kiln at a high temperature, which is 481*, it is cooled in the cooling machine at 25* for 1 hour strictly. Before being ready, it is sorted by a special employee into two sections, waste and ready for usage.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words glass with synonyms.
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