The graph below shows four countries of residence of overseas students in Australia. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make make comparisons where relevant
The line graph given provides information
of
overseas Change preposition
on
students
in Australia from four different countries
.
Overall
, the number of students
from other countries
generally increased from 1982 to 2000.
The statistics of Indonesia and Hong Kong has
some similarities. Correct subject-verb agreement
have
Since
1982 to 1994 both of them picked up, but after 1994 the number of Change preposition
From
students
jumped. However
after 1997 the quantity
of Change the quantifier
number
students
stood at
or collapsed, and at the Change preposition
apply
ending
of Replace the word
end
Correct article usage
the 20th
20th century
statistics started to Add a hyphen
20th-century
rising up
again.
Wrong verb form
rise
The
Correct article usage
apply
Malaysia
and Singapore has
not a sharp rises or declines. In Correct subject-verb agreement
have
the
1982 all of Change the article
apply
countries
Add an article
the countries
has
0 numbers except Wrong verb form
had
Malaysia
, they
has about 5 Correct pronoun usage
which
students
at this
moment. This
two Correct determiner usage
These
countries
also
generally increased, but Malaysia
went down in the
1997. About 19 and 17 Change the article
apply
students
has
Singapore and Change the verb form
have
Malaysia
respectively.Submitted by zhadyra.serikbayeva2016 on
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