You have just won two tickets to a concert and want to invite your friend to go with you. Write a letter to your friend. In the letter ● give details about the concert ● describe how you won the tickets ● explain why you’ve chosen your friend to go with you.

Dear Aman, It's been a

while

, hasn't it?

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exhilarated to inform you about the concert tickets which

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have won recently and

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want you''ll join me. Actually ,

music

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concert will be held on

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of

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national park

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which is beside my apartment.I have heard the news that most of the

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singesr

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singer

singers

will be

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in

this

music show.

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sunday

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,

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went to the shopping mall which is in my city and

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saw

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crowd of people.I

have

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oberserved

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observed

that there was a lottery competition and

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participated by spending

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bucks and

then

fortunately,

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won

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two free tickets. As you know, you are the only person who is close to my heart after my family so that's why

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decided to attend the show with you. Aside from

this

, we both have

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a common

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interest related to music

singer

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so

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though

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we

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enjoy

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a lot

with each other. I can't wait to see you in the next week. Best Regards, jass