You have just won two tickets to a concert and want to invite your friend to go with you. Write a letter to your friend. In the letter ● give details about the concert ● describe how you won the tickets ● explain why you’ve chosen your friend to go with you.

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Dear Aman, It's been a

while

, hasn't it?

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exhilarated to inform you about the concert tickets which

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have won recently and

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want you''ll join me. Actually ,

music

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a music

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concert will be held on

23rd

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the 23rd

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july

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July

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the national

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national park

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National Park

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which is beside my apartment.I have heard the news that most of the

bollywood

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singesr

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singer

singers

will be

performed

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this

music show.

Last

sunday

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went to the shopping mall which is in my city and

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saw

the

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crowd of people.I

have

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oberserved

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observed

that there was a lottery competition and

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participated by spending

few

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a few

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bucks and

then

fortunately,

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won

the

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two free tickets. As you know, you are the only person who is close to my heart after my family so that's why

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decided to attend the show with you. Aside from

this

, we both have

common

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interest related to music

singer

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singers

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though

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thought

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will

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enjoy

alot

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a lot

with each other. I can't wait to see you in the next week. Best Regards, jass

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task achievement

Pay attention to capitalization and spelling errors. Correcting 'I', 'singesr', 'oberserved', and 'alot' to their correct forms will improve accuracy.

coherence cohesion

Try to structure your paragraphs more logically, with each paragraph addressing a single idea more clearly.

task achievement

The letter provides a complete response to the prompt, including details about the concert, how the tickets were won, and why the friend was chosen.

task achievement

The tone of the letter is friendly and suitable, making it engaging for the reader.

coherence cohesion

The greeting and closing are appropriate and add a warm touch to the letter.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
29
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

172 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

concert details
artist/band name
date and time
location
guest performances
unique venue
concert theme
contest
raffle
promotion
shared interests
past experiences
attending concerts together
personal reasons
winning tickets

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