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The two maps illustrated the distribution of the facilities of the May city in 1950 and in the present.

The two maps illustrated the distribution of the facilities of the May city in 1950 and in the present.
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The
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 illustrate the main change to distribute some facilities which have taken place in May town between 1950 and the present.
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, the town has most notably shown to add a lake which indicates changing public facilities.
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 one facility remains the same
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 business district. Looking at the
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 in detail, to the north of the map the resident area was constructed in 1950, but it has been expanded in the present. In the east of the
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, the airport was built in 1950, and it has extended to the present. In the south of
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, one big change that stands out is that there has been an added lake over the whole period.
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, in 1950 major road was built.
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, it was enlarged in the present and was the same as the facilities of the government building. Regarding
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 still stands and it has been no changes to the business district.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words maps with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stands" was used 2 times.
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