The bar chart below shows the average number of visitors who went to six types of attractions in Canberra, on a weekday on the weekend, in 2019
The given bar chart compares the average amount of
people
who visited different sights in Canberra on a work Use synonyms
day
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weekend
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day
in 2019.
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Overall
, Linking Words
it is clear that
the most attractive places in Canberra on Linking Words
weekend
days and weekdays are cafes and restaurants. Use synonyms
Moreover
, we can notice that Linking Words
people
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enjoyed
going to visit attractions , especially on the weekends.
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To begin
with, on a workday, the average number of Linking Words
visitors
to regional parks was about 50 Use synonyms
people
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while
on a Linking Words
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day
, there were twice as many - about 100. The next facility is shopping centres, where the average sum of Use synonyms
visitors
was just below 60 on a weekday and around 90 on a Use synonyms
weekend
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day
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In addition
, the most crucial sights in Canberra are places where Linking Words
people
can eat Use synonyms
such
as cafes and restaurants, these places experienced around 90 Linking Words
people
on a weekday but approximately 150 Use synonyms
visitors
on a Use synonyms
weekend
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day
which was the highest point in 2019.
In 2019, regarding the 3 attractions, only about 20 travellers visited museums on a workday, and about 60 individuals on a Use synonyms
weekend
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day
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In addition
, we can see that just under 80 individuals went to the movie theatres on a Linking Words
weekend
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in contrast
, on a weekday, there were twice as less: around 40 Linking Words
people
. The Use synonyms
last
sights are libraries, where were just above 20 Linking Words
people
on a workday and around 40 Use synonyms
visitors
on a Use synonyms
weekend
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day
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