The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane.

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sugar

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cane.

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, by having a cursory glance

on

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the diagram.It can be clearly seen that the

7 step

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production begins with the growth of

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canes

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from the farm and ends with

producing

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of

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.

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is achieved by cultivating

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from 12-18 months. The process starts with

growing

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of

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canes

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cane

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from 12-18 months.

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, they are harvested by the farmer and truck.After that, the

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canes

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begins to

crushed

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be crushed

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to produce juice using

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.

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, the juice

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purified by

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filter. In step 5, juice has evaporated to

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syrup

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heat.

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when they have been correctly evaporated, they

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to centrifuge it by doing it

seprates

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separates

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crystals from

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the syrup

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.The final stage in

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process will be to drying and cooling of the

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.