The graph below gives information about the technology that households in one US city used for watching television between 2004 and 2014
The line chart illustrated provides information regarding the technology usage in an American city household for television entertainment in a decade.
Overall
, there are two trends an increasing trend with Satellite and Internet, meanwhile, a moderately decreasing trend is happening to Broadcast and Cable.
According to
the line chart, there is a relatively huge rise with the Internet having approximately 10 thousand
in 2004 to 200 thousand
in the span of ten years. While
a sharp decrease to
Broadcast is happening from almost 100 Change preposition
in
thousand
at the start to barely 25 thousand
in 2014.
Moving on to the Cable it seems to be inconsistent and has fluctations
peaking at 2008 with relatively close 110 Correct your spelling
fluctuations
thousand
, Whereas
, to the Satelite that looks to be growing particularly slower than all the other categories having the highest point at respectful 120 thousand
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