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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The maps below show a bookstore in 2000 and now. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The maps below show a bookstore in 2000 and now. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The maps compare the changes in the bookstore between 2000 and now.
Overall
, we can notice that the aspects
such
 as travel, new
books
, service desk and the entrance have remained the same, unchanged.
Moreover
, some figures have been replaced by other figures.
To begin
, in 2000, the bookshop had two
fiction
 areas, which were located to the north side and to the northeast of
this
 building, but now the largest
fiction
 has been replaced by 4 smaller areas :arts, hobbies, cookery and
fiction
.
In addition
, the second
fiction
place
 on the northeast side of the bookshop has become to non-
fiction
 spot. Now the book Saller has a cafe
instead
 of a non-
fiction
place
 in the south part.
Additionally
, in 2000,
this
 shop related to
books
 had a travel, new
books
, and service desk to the left side of its
place
 , which stayed the same now.
Due to
 the fact that the art, cookery and hobbies
books
 shelves transported to the previous
place
 of
fiction
books
, there were appeared new 3 tables, where people can read their
books
.
Also
, the entrance was not changed and it remained in the same
place
 in 2024.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words books, fiction, place with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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