You missed an important meeting at work. Write a letter to your manager. In the letter: -apologize for not attending -explain why you did not attend -say what you will do to make up for it

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Dear manager, I am writing

this

letter to say sorry regarding a meeting that I was unable to attend. A meeting that was organized by a famous company AYN

last

, Saturday in City hall and I received an invitation from our firm, but I am unhappy because was not there. You know that from the month, I am getting requested off because my grandmother is a heart patient. Suddenly, she felt pain and became unconscious so we called an ambulance. We all were in the City hospital for the care.

Also

, my father is not living with us, so I am the only person in my house who has to handle all the emergencies. Rohan attended

this

meeting and told me it was a recorded conversation. Could you send me that so, I can catch up on all the missing work from home? I really apologize for the inconvenience. I hope to hear a prompt response from your side regarding

this

matter and I will hand over all the assignments as soon as possible. Yours sincerely, Mohit

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Task Achievement

In the second paragraph, rephrase the first sentence to improve clarity and correctness. Consider: 'I deeply regret that I was not able to attend the important meeting organized by AYN last Saturday at City Hall, which I was invited to by our firm.'

Coherence and Cohesion

Ensure that each paragraph truly expresses a single clear idea. While your writing is mostly clear, combining or breaking up some points may enhance clarity.

Task Achievement

The letter includes appropriate apologies and an explanation, which shows an understanding of the task requirements.

Task Achievement

You have used clear and polite language, which is suitable for a formal letter.

Coherence and Cohesion

The letter has good structure, making it easy for the reader to follow your points.

Coherence and Cohesion

The greeting and closing of the letter are appropriate and professional.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

177 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Sincerely apologize
Personal emergency
Sudden illness
Unexpected circumstances
Compensate for my absence
Reschedule the meeting
Catch up on missed information
Take on additional tasks

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