Increasing car usage in many large global cities has caused a number of problems. Some cities have proposed banning private vehicles from the daycity centre. To what extent do you agree?
Nowadays a huge amount of people are using their private
cars
to commute in expanded cities which creates lots of problems, so local councils think it would be better to designate some regulations about using private cars
. Because of many reasons that I will mention in the essay I agree with this
solution.
Firstly
, the vehicles
that we are using now are based on fossil fuels, so we should consider that they are limited, therefore
prohibiting private cars
will decrease the level of usage of our energy sources. secondly
, if every individual uses their own personal car, it would cause traffic congestion in the city, so by banning them, the government will be able to manage the rush traffic hours. Finally
, these restrictions will decrease the amount of air pollution that vehicles
make and emit in the air.
On the other hand
, while
countries ban the usage of private cars
, they should encourage people to use public transportation, which can be more efficient. Enforcing such
a ban can be challenging due to
potential public resistance, the need for infrastructure changes, and the logistics of accommodating public transport or alternative transport means. Also
, providing sufficient and on-time public vehicles
will be necessary for the cities. For example
, a person who is forced to use a bus instead
of a private car should not face difficulties anymore.
In conclusion, for lots of reasons setting some regulations for utilising vehicles
would be better for sprawling cities in the future. Countries will prohibit individuals from commuting with personal cars
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph has a clear central idea and that main points are developed with additional supporting details or examples. For instance, providing specific examples of cities that have successfully implemented such bans could enhance your argument.
task achievement
Some sentences can be rephrased for clarity. For instance, instead of 'a huge amount of people,' you could say 'a large number of people.' Focus on minor grammatical corrections for a more polished essay.
coherence cohesion
Well-organized with clear introduction and conclusion, making it easy to follow your arguments.
task achievement
The response effectively addresses both sides of the argument, showing a balanced perspective.