Many people join distance-learning programmes and study at home, but some people think that it cannot bring the same benefit as attending colleges or universities does. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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some people insist that joining learning programs online and studying at

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cannot bring the same

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as directly attending colleges or universities

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, I totally disagree with

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idea. The reason for

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is that joining educational courses online is, in fact, more beneficial for many people in saving

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and online courses enable us to manage our schedules more efficiently.

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taking part in distance-learning programs and studying at

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costs us less

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, when we consider having a long journey to the halls and classrooms where lectures are taking happen; we can save a lot of

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by skipping the process of heading toward the places. A good example of

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is; amid COVID-19, all the conferences and lectures have been cancelled to stop the infection and,

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, they were switched to online meetings and lectures, which enabled lots of workers and officers, who

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would have had

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-consuming journey to the avenue, to join these activities at

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or at their workplace on

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, online courses are more flexible because we do not have to consider the place.

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to say, we can focus on arranging the

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schedules

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only each other's schedule because we do not have to compete with other companies for the

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of the place.

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, if we are to arrange a physical study program at a hospital, we have to make sure of each other's schedule

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and book a conference room, and we often find ourselves not being able to decide the schedule in the way we wish because the conference room has been already occupied until several weeks ahead.

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is not the case in online studying; everyone can join on smartphones, laptops or desktops anywhere in a good Internet environment. In conclusion,

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some individuals argue that joining distance-learning programmes and studying at

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cannot outweigh the benefit of directly and physically attending colleges and universities, in reality, the former produces many more benefits than the latter because it is

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-saving and its flexibility of schedules makes it much easier for many people to work.