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You have chosen This will take you about 0 minutes STEP 1 - Read the task Last week you were on a flight to London. Unfortunately, when you got off the plane, you left a bag there. You did not remember about the bag until you got to your hotel. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter explain what has happened describe the bag and its contents say what you would like them to do about this problem You should You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to report an incident that occurred during my recent flight with your airline.
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 week, I
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 to London on one of your flights. Unfortunately, upon disembarking, I accidentally left a bag on the plane. I only realized
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 after I had arrived at my hotel and was unpacking my belongings. The bag is a medium-sized black backpack with a small red logo on the front pocket. It contains several important items, including my laptop, a pair of
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 headphones, a notebook, and a few personal documents
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 as my passport and travel itinerary. These items are of great value to me, both financially and sentimentally, and I am eager to recover them as soon as possible. I would greatly appreciate it if you could assist me in locating and returning the bag. If it has been found, please let me know how I can arrange for its collection or delivery. I am happy to cover any associated costs.
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, if there are any forms or procedures I need to complete, kindly provide the necessary details. Thank you for your prompt attention to
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 matter. I look forward to your response. Yours faithfully, [Your Name]

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task achievement
Consider slightly enhancing the opening paragraph to include more context regarding the flight details, such as the flight number or date. This would help provide a more complete picture.
coherence and cohesion
While your ideas are generally clear, ensuring that each paragraph maintains a tight focus on a single idea could enhance readability even further. Consider rephrasing or splitting more detailed content into separate paragraphs where appropriate.
task achievement
The letter is very well-structured, addressing all parts of the prompt with clarity and detail, which is commendable.
suitable writing tone
The tone used throughout the letter is polite and professional, making it suitable for a formal request.
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