The graph below shows a typical American and a Japanese office. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows a typical American and a Japanese office. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The
two
graphs illustrate the differences in typical
office
design in
two
countries, Japan and America.
Overall
, the Japanese typical
office
shows less privacy compared to the
American
one. In
Japanese
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Japan
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typical
office
relies on the open-officeoffice pattern, with no walls between different offices. The
American
typical
office
gives more privacy to
employees
; with all managers
have
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their own offices, other
employees
share an open space in the centre. A typical
American
office
consists of 7 rooms. Three of them are allocated for managers,
two
as conference rooms, one for storage, and the
last
room is used as a printer copier.
While
in the centre of the
office
, there are eight chairs for regular
employees
. Notably, the
American
typical
office
has
two
windows on the left and right sides. For the Japanese typical
office
, the situation is considerably different. The department manager's
office
is located in the middle of the top side, and in front of it there are
two
sections. Each section contains a manager and 6
employees
, and there is just one window behind the department manager's
office
.
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