The charts below show the result of a survey of adult education. The first chart shows the reason why adults decide to study. The pie chart shows how people think the costs of adult education should be shared. Write a report for a university lecturer, describing the information shown below.
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The bar chart illustrates seven different reasons why
adults
want to Use synonyms
study
, with the pie charts depicting the Use synonyms
fund
per course for 3 types to share.
Fix the agreement mistake
funds
Overall
, it can be seen most Linking Words
adults
choose to Use synonyms
study
because they are interested in the subject and to gain qualifications. Use synonyms
In addition
, people think that the amount of money should mostly be spent on individuals and employers.
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To begin
with, the main reason that persuaded Linking Words
adults
to Use synonyms
study
was interest in the subject, with the highest percentage of 40%, followed by 38% of Use synonyms
adults
who want to gain qualifications. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, three reasons consisting of being helpful for the current job, improving prospects of promotion, and enjoying learning were around 20%. Linking Words
In addition
, Linking Words
adults
who Use synonyms
study
because they want to change their jobs and to meet new people were roughly 10%.
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Moreover
, people believe that the cost of education should be shared by individuals with 40%, followed by employers 35%, and the Linking Words
last
one was taxpayers 25%.Linking Words
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "in addition".
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words adults, study with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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