The bar chart illustrates the annual office rents in five international cities in 2008 and 2013, while the table displays the office vacancy rates for the same cities during those years

The bar chart illustrates the annual office rents in five international cities in 2008 and 2013, while the table displays the office vacancy rates for the same cities during those years
The bar chart illustrates the annual
office
rents in five international
cities
in 2008 and 2013,
while
the table displays the
office
vacancy
rates
for the same
cities
during those years.
Overall
, most
cities
experienced a significant increase in
office
rent
per square meter from 2008 to 2013, except for
City
D, which saw a decrease. Interestingly,
City
D
also
had the most substantial increase in
office
vacancy
rates
,
while
the other
cities
generally saw a decline in vacancies. In 2008,
City
A had the highest annual
rent
at approximately $1,700 per square meter, followed by
City
B at just under $1,500.
City
C's
rent
was $1,000, more than double that of
City
E. By 2013,
City
B's
rent
surged to about $2,250 per square meter, becoming the most expensive,
while
City
D's
rent
dropped to just over $500. As for
vacancy
rates
,
City
A saw a slight decrease of 2% in 2013, and
City
B's rate dropped from 7% in 2008 to 2% in 2013.
While
most
cities
saw a reduction in
vacancy
rates
,
City
D's
vacancy
rate dramatically increased to 23% in 2013, representing the highest among all the
cities
.
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