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The bar chart illustrates the annual office rents in five international cities in 2008 and 2013, while the table displays the office vacancy rates for the same cities during those years

The bar chart illustrates the annual office rents in five international cities in 2008 and 2013, while the table displays the office vacancy rates for the same cities during those years
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The bar chart illustrates the annual
office
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 rents in five international
cities
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 in 2008 and 2013,
while
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 the table displays the
office
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vacancy
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rates
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 for the same
cities
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 during those years.
Overall
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, most
cities
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 experienced a significant increase in
office
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rent
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 per square meter from 2008 to 2013, except for
City
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 D, which saw a decrease. Interestingly,
City
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 D
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 had the most substantial increase in
office
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vacancy
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rates
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,
while
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 the other
cities
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 generally saw a decline in vacancies. In 2008,
City
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 A had the highest annual
rent
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 at approximately $1,700 per square meter, followed by
City
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 B at just under $1,500.
City
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 C's
rent
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 was $1,000, more than double that of
City
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 E. By 2013,
City
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 B's
rent
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 surged to about $2,250 per square meter, becoming the most expensive,
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City
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 D's
rent
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 dropped to just over $500. As for
vacancy
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rates
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,
City
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 A saw a slight decrease of 2% in 2013, and
City
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 B's rate dropped from 7% in 2008 to 2% in 2013.
While
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 most
cities
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 saw a reduction in
vacancy
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rates
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,
City
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 D's
vacancy
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 rate dramatically increased to 23% in 2013, representing the highest among all the
cities
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.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 100%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words office, cities, vacancy, rates, rent, city with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "illustrates" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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