A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not well-managed. What are the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern world? Do you think that the benefits of tourism outweigh its drawbacks?
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Task Achievement
Try to provide more varied examples from different regions or types of tourism to enrich your argument.
Coherence & Cohesion
Consider adding a paragraph that explains how tourism management could mitigate the negative effects, to offer a balanced view.
Positive Example
Effectively used Thailand as a specific example to illustrate the economic benefits of tourism, which strengthens your argument.
Structure
Successfully introduced and concluded your essay with clear positions, providing a strong logical flow to your argument.
Task Response
Your essay addresses both the advantages and disadvantages of tourism, fulfilling the requirement of presenting a balanced argument.
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