The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy ni 20 and projections for 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy ni 20 and projections for 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The charts show the disparity in the ages of the
population
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in the
year
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2000 and projections for 2050 for Italy and Yemen. It is noticeable that both
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countries will have changed significantly in 2050. In the
year
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2000, half the
population
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of Yemen was aged between 0-14 years
while
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the majority of the other half was aged between 15-59 years. Only 3.6% of the
population
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was aged above 60. In the
year
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2050, it was projected that more than half of the
population
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would be between 15-59 years old.
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, only 37% of the
population
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would be aged between 37% which is 13.1% less when compared to 2000.
Lastly
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, only 5.7% of the
population
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above
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60.
On the other hand
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, in the
year
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2000, Italy had 61.6% of the
population
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aged between 15-49.
In contrast
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to Yemen, Italy had more number of
people
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aged above 60 at 24.1% followed by 14.3% of
people
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who were aged between 0-14. In the
year
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2050
while
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the projected
population
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of
people
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aged between 15-59 decreased from 61.6% to 46.2%, the number of
people
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who will be over 60 increased by 18.2%
whereas
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the
population
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of
people
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aged between 0-14 wouldn't show much change and would have only decreased by 2.8%
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words population, year, people with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "show" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • population distribution
  • age group
  • young population
  • mature population
  • aging society
  • demographic shift
  • proportion
  • dominant
  • balanced distribution
  • projected increase
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