The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.
The chart illustrates the
number
of 2 types of travellers (staying on cruise ships, staying on the island
) that visited the Caribbean island
, from 2010 to 2017.
Overall
, there is a continuous increase trend of
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in
number
, while
the island
visitors line fluctuated. Moreover
, the total number
of tourists is rising over the period.
In 2010, The triangle line started at around 0.7 million
of
visitors, which is more than ship visitors (approximately 0.3 Change preposition
apply
million
people). After that, the number
of island
travellers reached to
1.5 Change preposition
apply
million
people in 2013s, remaining at the same rate until 2015.
On the other hand
, the rectangles
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the graph of the rectangles
graph
declined slightly in 2012 before rising continuously to 2 million
people at the end
of the graph
, higher than another
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other graphs
graph
. The popularity of the Caribbean island
increased significantly, starting at 1 million
before reaching to
3.5 Change preposition
apply
million
at the end
of the period in 2017, the peak of the graph
.Submitted by dondollaraus on
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