The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.
The chart illustrates the
number
of 2 types of travellers (staying on cruise ships, staying on the Use synonyms
island
) that visited the Caribbean Use synonyms
island
, from 2010 to 2017.
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Overall
, there is a continuous increase trend Linking Words
of
the cruise visitor Change preposition
in
number
, Use synonyms
while
the Linking Words
island
visitors line fluctuated. Use synonyms
Moreover
, the total Linking Words
number
of tourists is rising over the period.
In 2010, The triangle line started at around 0.7 Use synonyms
million
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of
visitors, which is more than ship visitors (approximately 0.3 Change preposition
apply
million
people). After that, the Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
island
travellers reached Use synonyms
to
1.5 Change preposition
apply
million
people in 2013s, remaining at the same rate until 2015.
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On the other hand
, Linking Words
the rectangles
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the graph of the rectangles
graph
declined slightly in 2012 before rising continuously to 2 Use synonyms
million
people Use synonyms
at the end
of the Linking Words
graph
, higher than Use synonyms
another
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other graphs
graph
. The popularity of the Caribbean Use synonyms
island
increased significantly, starting at 1 Use synonyms
million
before reaching Use synonyms
to
3.5 Change preposition
apply
million
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at the end
of the period in 2017, the peak of the Linking Words
graph
.Use synonyms
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