The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005.
The illustrated table depicts the changes
of
international Change preposition
in
tourists
in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005.
Generally, the noticeably high indexes between all the period
was shown by Fix the agreement mistake
periods
the
Europe, Correct article usage
apply
whereas
the lowest was shown by Middle
East.
First of all, from the period of Correct article usage
the Middle
1990
almost all the indexes of all countries rose gradually, but between Add a comma
1990,
the
2000 and Correct article usage
apply
2005
the number of Add a comma
2005,
tourists
from America declined slightly (118.2 millions
and 113.2 Change to singular
million
millions
respectively). Change to singular
million
Moreover
, in 2005 the vast majority of tourists
were from Europe with four
hundred million index, Correct article usage
a four
while
in
contrast
the lowest rating showed the Add a comma
contrast,
tourists
from Africa with only 28.7 millions
.
In fact, Change to singular
million
highest
difference of more than Add an article
a highest
the highest
hundred
Correct article usage
a hundred
millions
was between 1990 and 1995 in the indexes of European Change to singular
million
tourists
, with 280.2 millions
and 390.3 Change to singular
million
millions
respectively, Change to singular
million
on the contrary
, the slightest change also
in this
period has been shown by the tourists
from Middle
East with only one point five Correct article usage
the Middle
millions
difference.Change to singular
million
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